Jab aankhein moondein let jaati hogi tum,
Toh pariyaan thoda kam mehsoos karti hongi khud
ko,
Pariyon ki duniya ki shehzaadi lagti hogi na
tum,
Aankhein band kiye, ek muskaan chehre par liye,
Apna ana ko tumse bachaane ki koshish mein,
Yeh neend liye baithi hain tumhaari
Chhed rahi hain laakh khayaal
Tumhe dekh jal rahi hain baari baari
Par meri baat suno,
Inhe jeetne mat do,
Subah intezaar kar rahi hai tumhara
Aankhein moondo
Dil ko shaant karo
Aur chalo, ab so jaao...
Bahot khoob! So hi jaana chahiye isko sunke. Achche sapnon ki guarantee jo de di hai tumne ye likh kar! ;)
ReplyDeleteYo! And ek din aayega someone will do this for me :)
DeleteInsha allah! Humein yaqeen hai woh din door nahi :-) Uparwala aapko aur bhi dher saari nematein bakhshein!!
DeleteCheers,
Nave
Subah subah khush kar diya :)
DeleteI wish the same, and more for you.
really nice......... to read this and feel it ! especially when night falls...... !
ReplyDeletehow i would put it is :
red like the creatures of night
white like the sigh of piercing moon
it shines white and scatters red !
It shines white and scatters red!
DeleteI would love to take this cue to write my next poem. May I?
well ! as you wish........ u are a person with rules and who knows the pricelessness of such "things" ! go on....... and truely its an honour for me that an OXFORD reviewer says that to me !
DeleteThanks for the thumbs up. Shall take this up soon :)
DeleteRead both of your December posts.Previous, English one is deep with meaning, this one is deep with emotions.I noticed that you can quickly change your mood [regarding writing], its a good quality for writer.You have it amongst many more.
ReplyDeleteThanks sir. You yet again took out time to read and share such encouraging words. Means so much to me.
Deletebhoot kub... its really good
ReplyDeleteThank you!
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