Thursday, December 5, 2013

Chalo Ab So Jaao

Jab aankhein moondein let jaati hogi tum,
Toh pariyaan thoda kam mehsoos karti hongi khud ko, 
Pariyon ki duniya ki shehzaadi lagti hogi na tum,
Aankhein band kiye, ek muskaan chehre par liye,
Apna ana ko tumse bachaane ki koshish mein,
Yeh neend liye baithi hain tumhaari
Chhed rahi hain laakh khayaal
Tumhe dekh jal rahi hain baari baari


Par meri baat suno,
Inhe jeetne mat do,
Subah intezaar kar rahi hai tumhara
Aankhein moondo
Dil ko shaant karo

Aur chalo, ab so jaao...


12 comments:

  1. Bahot khoob! So hi jaana chahiye isko sunke. Achche sapnon ki guarantee jo de di hai tumne ye likh kar! ;)

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    1. Yo! And ek din aayega someone will do this for me :)

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    2. Insha allah! Humein yaqeen hai woh din door nahi :-) Uparwala aapko aur bhi dher saari nematein bakhshein!!

      Cheers,
      Nave

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    3. Subah subah khush kar diya :)
      I wish the same, and more for you.

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  2. really nice......... to read this and feel it ! especially when night falls...... !

    how i would put it is :

    red like the creatures of night
    white like the sigh of piercing moon
    it shines white and scatters red !

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    1. It shines white and scatters red!

      I would love to take this cue to write my next poem. May I?

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    2. well ! as you wish........ u are a person with rules and who knows the pricelessness of such "things" ! go on....... and truely its an honour for me that an OXFORD reviewer says that to me !

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    3. Thanks for the thumbs up. Shall take this up soon :)

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  3. Read both of your December posts.Previous, English one is deep with meaning, this one is deep with emotions.I noticed that you can quickly change your mood [regarding writing], its a good quality for writer.You have it amongst many more.

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    1. Thanks sir. You yet again took out time to read and share such encouraging words. Means so much to me.

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