Moist pearls tickle my toes
Smell of dew runs up my nose
Bare feet nudging at rich wet grass,
Droplets reflecting the sheen of stars
Eyelid touched by a rainy cue
My lips curve at the magic of dew.
The darkest hour enchants like a spell,
Dawn crawls in with a musty smell.
Morning bliss derived from that,
Nighttime's glow in the nature's lap.
Beautiful picture with lovely lines.
ReplyDeleteAwesome lines...Refreshing as a dew...
ReplyDeletewow lines here :)
ReplyDeleteshort and impressive !
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Nighttime's glow in the nature's lap..
ReplyDeleteHappiness peeps in through a narrow gap..
You look around through all this beauty..
Feels like a feather has been added to your cap!! :D
You painted a breath-taking image with your words. A short, simple and sweet poem. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteAnd hey my dear sweet lovely friend,
ReplyDeleteFrom this blog to another love I send,
Apologies for being away for long,
I loved the way you sung this DEWY SONG,
And as a matter of fact I would like to say,
I'm a fan of dew too, like ur way!;)<3
@Seema
ReplyDeleteWarm welcome! I think this is the first of your comments. Hope I will see some more coming from you :)
@Saru, Deepak
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your kind words. Never thought while writing it would come out this good.
:)
@Enigmatic Soul
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Nascent Emissions. I am glad you liked the post. Thanks for letting me know, and for 'following'.
@Kunal
ReplyDeleteWhat to say of your creativity sir! You are a veteran as far as I can see. Your words add sheen to my composition. Thanks a lot for sharing!
@Aakriti
ReplyDeleteAs I have posted on your blog, so I do here- Welcome back! Blogverse is dull without you being around.
And, needless to say, I loved your poem! Its sweet, charming, and has a nice rhythm to it. Your words decorate the place where they spill. Me and my blog,both are lucky to have you with us!
Thanks for making me smile :)
ReplyDeleteNice font!
ReplyDeleteOne day a rose came and asked me "who am I?"
I smiled and said, "you're mine and you're lovely"
The rose folded its petals back and de-bloomed!
I quickly ran to the mirror and found I'm ugly!
@Archika
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your smile :)
@Destiny's Child
ReplyDeleteNice font? Classic monotype corsiva :P
And those lines are really nice. They go to my diary. Thanks for posting them here :)