tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901701252396078909.post6441446295650285158..comments2024-03-01T15:52:17.308+05:30Comments on Nascent Emissions: A Portrait Of His LoveSaumya Kulshreshthahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05195931245951633406noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901701252396078909.post-13298400087892382842012-11-30T16:32:39.673+05:302012-11-30T16:32:39.673+05:30Thanks bhaiya!
Long, long time!Thanks bhaiya! <br />Long, long time!Saumya Kulshreshthahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05195931245951633406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901701252396078909.post-3387384529783147472012-11-30T16:31:08.227+05:302012-11-30T16:31:08.227+05:30Thanks a lot for sharing this with me. Keep commen...Thanks a lot for sharing this with me. Keep commenting!Saumya Kulshreshthahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05195931245951633406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901701252396078909.post-18538742324451382622012-11-29T01:16:26.099+05:302012-11-29T01:16:26.099+05:30Super!! :-)Super!! :-)testhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12275262956752382304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901701252396078909.post-18170644501999420552012-11-21T12:43:23.963+05:302012-11-21T12:43:23.963+05:30here saumya here i want to share here something us...here saumya here i want to share here something useful & motivational stuff i am certain that youwill like it...<br />“Writing is something that you don't know how to do. You sit down and it's something that happens, or it may not happen. So, how can you teach anybody how to write? It's beyond me, because you yourself don't even know if you're going to be able to. I'm always worried, well, you know, every time I go upstairs with my wine bottle. Sometimes I'll sit at that typewriter for fifteen minutes, you know. I don't go up there to write. The typewriter's up there. If it doesn't start moving, I say, well this could be the night that I hit the dust.”<br /> ― Charles Bukowski hope you will like this...!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901701252396078909.post-59048299792189936002012-11-19T01:56:17.440+05:302012-11-19T01:56:17.440+05:30Er, yes. Very few readers leave a reply on a reply...Er, yes. Very few readers leave a reply on a reply. So refreshing! You redid the visual and audio imagery in the poem. Nice!Saumya Kulshreshthahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05195931245951633406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901701252396078909.post-87686977801915547272012-11-18T20:01:34.592+05:302012-11-18T20:01:34.592+05:30Don't know if there is anything such as "...Don't know if there is anything such as "much of a poet" :) but it's always good to write. What you wrote didn't need a painting, because the words do it in itself. The fists tightening, the sly grin, the "moaning" music and all the details.. so yes, do keep writing such gems.Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901701252396078909.post-41819069114308789282012-11-18T17:02:43.133+05:302012-11-18T17:02:43.133+05:30Aah, thank you!
If it quickens your pulse, it ach...Aah, thank you! <br />If it quickens your pulse, it achieves its end :)Saumya Kulshreshthahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05195931245951633406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901701252396078909.post-84989013417381238932012-11-18T17:02:11.667+05:302012-11-18T17:02:11.667+05:30In two lines, you almost gave me a critical analys...In two lines, you almost gave me a critical analysis of my poem. Thank you for that. I am not much of a poet, but comments such as these always encourage me to write better. Saumya Kulshreshthahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05195931245951633406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901701252396078909.post-52764694595306343672012-11-18T17:01:23.184+05:302012-11-18T17:01:23.184+05:30Thank you! Afremov is a favorite for many of us! A...Thank you! Afremov is a favorite for many of us! And somehow, when I put his paintings us here, the whole feel of reading becomes better. Isn't it?Saumya Kulshreshthahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05195931245951633406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901701252396078909.post-7333109750912378462012-11-17T16:18:55.792+05:302012-11-17T16:18:55.792+05:30Immensely sensual, quickens the pulse.... beautifu...Immensely sensual, quickens the pulse.... beautiful use of the painting too...Nirvanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05801881963638441875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901701252396078909.post-63360681320374324692012-11-17T16:17:47.625+05:302012-11-17T16:17:47.625+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Nirvanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05801881963638441875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901701252396078909.post-61498434960936036752012-11-17T14:53:33.305+05:302012-11-17T14:53:33.305+05:30Brilliant. It flows quickly, and in rhythm. Agree ...Brilliant. It flows quickly, and in rhythm. Agree with Enigmatic Soul.. successful in conveing the emotion without complexity. The ending especially.. two bodies, one soul. Really well done.Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901701252396078909.post-51163886513869304482012-11-17T13:50:53.233+05:302012-11-17T13:50:53.233+05:30For one, Afremov is one of my favourite painters. ...For one, Afremov is one of my favourite painters. And two, I loved this poem. Beautiful, sensual, fast paced, conveying the emotion in not too complex words. Keep it up! Preeti S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08367363156339655332noreply@blogger.com